The Official Writing Challenge
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Well written story. So many times people wait till it is too late...
09/07/05
Bravo! My favorite entry so far.
09/07/05
Great story! Real and moving. Well done.
Heart-wrenching ending. Very well written. Thanks for sharing!
09/09/05
Wonderfully written!
09/09/05
I finally found it! I loved the way you showed that he was isolated within the group, my favourite line was: "Not scared of dying. Just of killing. … And seeing the dying" I'm sure many men have felt this way when forced into these circumstances. Well done!
09/09/05
Thanks for the hint! I love this story. Very powerful. War is such an awful thing to be a part of. I'm glad you showed that even in the trenches, God is there!
09/10/05
The type of story that leaves you breathless and gets your heart racing. I can totally feel for that Eben. To be in the kind of environment... but at the same time, I know he will be ok because he trust in Jesus. Sob! I'm gonna go read some of your other stuff right now!
09/11/05
What a wonderful entry! I was totally caught up in your story. Great job!