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Beautiful poem. I loved how you described every bit of nature. I'm not sure what 'luck of glovers' means, but the rest touched my heart. Good job.
Absolutely fantastic. I loved how you tied everything together. As long as we have Jesus the storms of life pass us by all because we are achored to the rock of life Jesus Christ. Thank you and keep writing. God bless.
An inspiring title for a very refreshing poem. I could feel the words washing over me like the cool gentle rain on my face and feel the determination to run through the mud and thunder with Jesus.
I liked your use of ohhhh.Jesus can turn the storms, the mud, whatever into good for our lives.
Lovely extended metaphor through this entire verse.

Quite note: You wanted 'forth', not 'fourth'.
I too, am intrigued by the 'luck of glovers'--must be a local idiom unfamiliar to me. I'm off to look it up--I love to learn new phrases!