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What a precious memory, I love how you moved it into having the same kind of relationship with the Heavenly Father. I was blessed.
Great job. I love this story and how you relate it to your heavenly Father.
I liked this one, although you have a run-on sentence in paragraph six. Nice comparison of our earthly father vs. our Heavenly Father.
Sweet story. I look forward to heaven to see my earthly Daddy and my heavenly Abba, From one Daddy's girl to another. Good Job.
This is a tender story that well captures the innocence of family life.
In my opinion your entry is slightly off-topic. The Grrr is certainly there but it's more of an aside and isn't really central to everything else that's going on.