The Official Writing Challenge
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You had me giggling at several points in this piece. I'm not sure I followed the whole thing, but it was certainly a delightful read!
I must admit I didn't get this at all. I did not see topic at all, I'm sure you can write, but please keep it where us earthlings can understand it.:)
I found this a fascinating story. I'm still not at all sure what the setting was, but it made for intriguing reading. And I learned a new word too - picayune. I'm guessing that the Grrr relates her her irritation with her parents, but I agree that it's not exactly central to the story. Cheers!