The Official Writing Challenge
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09/05/05
Absolutely beautiful! A painting in words of God's everlasting hope.
09/06/05
Interesting story. Work on flip-flopping point of view.
09/06/05
A little hard to read with the POV switches, but a good storyline.
09/07/05
You captured well the closed-down, grieving spirits of the parents. Maybe a more chronological telling of the story would work better?
09/07/05
A powerful story- thanks for sharing it.
Creative use of the topic. Well written. Thanks for sharing.