The Official Writing Challenge
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01/29/10
Good job setting the scene and showing the event through the eyes of spectators. I enjoyed it!
What a different POV. It made me see familiar stories in a new way.
I loved this story as seen through the eyes of two young boys from Nazareth. I truly enjoyed their encounter with Jesus. Keep writing and God bless.
Excellent. I love this POV. Great job.
02/03/10
I enjoyed watching the scene develop with each new description. Nice work.