The Official Writing Challenge
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11/07/09
God does miraculous transformations like this, doesn't he! What a story of hope.

11/07/09
Wonderful! Now all you need to do is have some proof your article and help you with punctuation and spacing. For every new paragraph add a space for a cleaner more easy to read article. Keep writing.
11/07/09
Sorry, that should be "someone" (see I need someone to proofread my writing too :)
I loved the dazzling white light of Christ. Once He takes a hold of you life is never the same. You can truly mount up with the wings of eagles. Separate your paragraphs and your writing will become gripping. God bless.