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10/29/09
"God's memory is evergreen."
What a lovely thought.
Touching story that may help others dealing with the same.
Very well told.
Touching story. I worked many years with Alzheimer's residents and their families. There are many sad and pitiful people. Well told.
10/30/09
How I loved this! My father-in-law just died a few months ago of Alzheimer's. Well done.
10/30/09
How beautifully you worded this poignant story as you pointed your reader towards the evergreen nature of God. I hope to see this deserving entry with a blue ribbon.
10/30/09
I had never realized that my sweet mother-in-law would not remember her faith, but we know He holds her. Excellent story.
10/31/09
nicely done. very real. (wipes away tear) thank you for sharing.
11/02/09
Wonderful! I enjoyed every word of this. God's memory is evergreen and His love will comfort when no human can. He never forgets our faith. Thanks for writing this and I hope you win.
This sentence stood out... he pointed out that Gods memory was evergreen. Her memory may fail her, but God would remember and bring a Spring when the colors of the leaves would never change. Well done, Bill. Wonderfully written.