The Official Writing Challenge
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10/22/09
I would love to see this illustrated. Good job.
10/22/09
Nice imagination, not sure though why the story of the beginning would have to be fantasized. You obviously have talent to write so keep it up.
10/23/09
Yes great imagination and writing ability to go with it. Reminded me of CS Lewis type 'out of the box thinking'.
10/23/09
I thoroughly enjoyed this story and agree it'd be neat to see it illustrated. I would've liked to read more and maybe have Twig and Trinket be offered a flower instead of fruit since every other point was out of the box thinking. the ending was stupendous! Surely our King covers us with His Wings. Thank you for the reminder.
I love fairy tales and this was no exception. Keep up the good work.
10/26/09
great fairy tale portrayal of The Beginning. enjoyed reading it.
10/26/09
Loved your take on the story of Adam and Eve. This flowed very well and I loved your descriptions. Great ending.
10/27/09
Wonderful story for fantasy fans--well done.