The Official Writing Challenge
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Extremely well-written and descriptive.

I was very interested in the story between the narrator and Jacques, and would have liked more of that and perhaps a bit less exposition.

I really can't wait to read more from you--this was first-rate.
I enjoyed reading this sensory rich story. You took me there. Thank you.
What a delightful story to read, rich in detail. Thanks for writing it.
Thanks Karen, for sharing you're gift from the deep south.

I sense a novel brewing rich in history, and glowing with charm.
I enjoyed this story and am glad for you that it was recognized for its skillful telling.