The Official Writing Challenge
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There is beauty with the sadness of your story. Loved the setting and the purpose of the parents. The transition from past to present was a little confusing, but you definitely made your point and showed a life well lived for Christ.
Oh what a sad story! Well told but the title was confusing . The summer of 64 presumable refered to the firdt part of the story. My only hopefullly constructive criticsm as I was drawn into the story and felt the emotions quite powerfully.
What a beautiful but very sad story. It pulled me in and I felt the pain of all the people involved. Thank you for sharing such tenderness and a very loving God.
Sorry for not distinguishing between the past and present. I know I shoud have, but was in a hurry to get my entry in and didn't check it thoroughly. Thanks for the comments so far.Norms
Well-written story filled with memories and emotions. Good job.
A sad story, with much heartfelt emotion. Thanks for sharing this!