The Official Writing Challenge
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Lovely poetry.
07/11/09
I enjoyed this poem and the message it conveyed.
I think it would have read more easily if you had put spaces between the stanzas.
07/12/09
You captured, very nicely, the ability of our Potter to remake us, even in our latter years.
Lovely poem with lots of wisdom.
07/15/09
thank you. I agree a few "verses" and spacings would still allow this peice to flow
07/17/09
i really enjoyed your poem, very simple & str8 2 da point. :)