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quite a dramatic story. I am not that familiar with the story of robin hood so a bit difficyult to know the characters. The description of the girl gwen and her feelings and state after the attack was good. Not sure how welll it fitted the theme however.
This was a great snippet of a bigger story. It was well told with good descriptions. Gwyn's story was really strong, but the switch to Little John gave me a bit of a jolt. I think I would have liked it all from Gwyn's perspective.
Like other readers I was a bit confused as to how the characters related to each other in this story, in particular, the relationship between Gwyn and Ranulf, and why Robin Hood's band had special charge of her?
BUT that did not detract from your very powerful descriptions of Gwyn's distress which really got my pulse up!
I love Robin Hood and his band of merry men. I loved the story of Gwen. Thanks for sharing.