The Official Writing Challenge
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06/04/09
How well you captured the difference between the two grandmothers and the emotions left when they passed away.
06/06/09
good writing. If you could have split the paragraphs slightly and made a few more it would be easier for me to read, but perhaps I am just getting lazy. Thanks
Thanks for sharing this story. I enjoyed it very much. Take care and God bless and keep you.