The Official Writing Challenge
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Good job with the flashes of scenes from the lives of these two women.

A few times I had to backtrack a bit to figure out who was talking--maybe a few more dialogue tags or attributions would help?

I like that you didn't portray one life path as 'wrong' and the other as 'right'.
The balance between "the grass is greener there" and the affirmation of each other so captured the bitter and sweet.