The Official Writing Challenge
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05/28/09
I would love to have read more about the uncle--some specific things about him, and especially of his relationship to this little girl, since she's the POV character of your story.
06/01/09
Yes, a story that tells of something he and his niece did together would help illustrate the wonderful relationship the two had. He sounds like he was a lovely and caring man!