The Official Writing Challenge
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05/21/09
A sweet poem with a good message.

I'd have liked a little bit more imagery, and perhaps a smoother meter.

Love the epilog--the last few stanzas that really brought your message home.
I liked the message. The rhthym flowed at first but a cople stanzas were just a little longer but this is good! I like poetry so this spoke to me and your title was brought to life in your piece.:0)