The Official Writing Challenge
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05/21/09
I like the thought-provoking nature of this, and the parralel structure.

I wonder what I'd be like with some added imagery, or perhaps a bit of figurative language here and there?

This packs a lot of punch in just a few words.
05/25/09
Good thoughts. Thank you.