The Official Writing Challenge
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I really really REALLY liked this story. It kept me going to the end. I love these stories that make all of us professing to be Christians take a good look at ourselves. And, I admire the bravery of a writer to do so!! To say nothing of what a fun read it was....
I enjoyed the flow of your words; also, your style of writing fit this story nicely. The story itself was fun to read with a great ending.
Some great characterisation. Highly enjoyable read. And funny too.