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An excellent choice for the topic, but how sad that your MC's mother was unable to express her love except through a cloud of alcohol. Well done, good job.
I thought this piece was quite powerful and would relate to many people.
I especially like the extreme love the young mom pours out on her family in spite of her own childhood years. You showed very good extremes in this piece and it is very sad.
Wow, I didn't see that coming. Alcoholism is such a bummer, and such a "wrecker" of lives and relationships. You covered this story and the topic well.
What a sad picture your presented. I was so glad that the mc had an understanding, caring husband.
Your story reminds us all of the sad truth regarding alcoholism and the hurt that an unloving parent can cause to a child. Thank you for sharing this.