The Official Writing Challenge
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Wow, I sure didn't see that coming!

Good writing--I'd have like to see it expanded a bit. Did you have some leftover words? I'd encourage you to use them all, and also to put an extra space between your paragraphs.

This is thought-provoking: what's the take-away for the family of the guy in the blue jacket?
Well this was interesting. Certainly caught me off guard. I did get a little confused and so would recommending paragraphing a little clarification.
Found it a bit confusing to read without paragraphs.
Good content and ideas.
Well done.
Talk about shock endings! I too would like to see this expanded. Great creativity.
Hi Cecile. I'm a week late, but wanted to leave a quick note to let you know your entry, "Going Up," actually did very well in the Up and Down Challenge. Although you didn't receive an award, you made it into the Highest Rankings for Level 2, placing 6th in that Level.

If you'd like to check the highest rankings for yourself, you can find them here:

The highest rankings are posted every Thursday evening on the Message Boards.

Again, well done! :-)

Hope to see you at the FaithWriters' Conference in August.

With love, Deb (Challenge Coordinator)