The Official Writing Challenge
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Nice job! I liked the last sentence, "his prayers have traveled around the world.
08/02/05
That was very cool! Enjoyed reading your entry--I think that the part about him coming too-could have been a little more detailed and realistic though. I liked the way you brought this around to the end. God bless ya, littlelight
I enjoyed your article. I felt riveted to the computer to see how it would turn out. Keep up the good writing!
08/06/05
Very well written - nothing like another chance, but too many people ignore it when the get just one more chance :(
08/08/05
Venice, this was a really good entry and I wanted to let you know that it was in the semi-finals. So be encouraged and keep up the great writing. You are doing very well. With love, Deb (Challenge Coordinator)
Thanks, Deb! You always encourage me...I really appreciate your taking the time to let me know it was in the semi-finals...I'm glad we have the Weekly Challenge as it keeps me disciplined in regular submissions. God bless all of you!