The Official Writing Challenge
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I would love to visit those wonderful places you saw, too! And who could desire more than to be triumphal over death...which we are and will be, thanks to our Lord and Savior!
Wow, am I ever loving Intermediates this week--like the last two pieces, you wrote about some places that I was alos privileged to visit last summer. I love the spiritual lesson in this essay.
The detail, the song and all else was well-described and written.

The entire piece was good, but my favorite part, strangely enough was "gloriously triumphed over death". I want that said of me too.
I like the way you link together the tourist bits with your obvious interest in the Wesley brothers. Made your entry more than just a collection of travel anecdotes.
I thought that the hymn/chorus was a digression and didn't really develop your central theme and as such could safely have been omitted.