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Beautifully childlike tone and cadence. And like the speaker, I as a reader didn't see the reason for the ride until the end.
This is a great piece! I love the rhythm and ryme. Well done. May god bless you always!
Enjoyed reading the poem, very smooth and nicely written. Childlike faith it seems. God bless ya, littlelight
Absolutely beautiful. I was right there in the backseat with her!
I would love for you to submit wonderful poems like this to my group "Poetry and Poets of God":
Oh, I was riding happily along, too, ready for a carefree day! Suddenly, I caught my breath as I comprehended the meaning of the ride! At that same moment, the peace and grace mentioned in your poem also filled my own heart. Well done!
Loved this - the childlike tone, word choices, and rhythm, and the surprising ending. Well done!