The Official Writing Challenge
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07/26/05
I loved that! Especially the ending. I was smiling about daddy needing the tranquilizers. I love boxers anyway! Very nice! God bless ya, littlelight
A lovely story! May God bless you always!
I loved this, it's very visual. I did get a little confused in the middle, and I think that the names of Hurricane and Hercules were both good choices but only one. This was a lot of fun and would make a good chapter in a book.
A fun mix of drama and comedy! Loved the "daddy's boy" ending. :-)