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07/19/05
Cute angle on "camping." I don't think you necessarily needed the first paragraph though. The piece would have stood up well without it.
A great effort with a great message.
Blessings, Lynda
07/19/05
I agree with your comment on the first paragraph. This would be a great story for teens. A lesson. Thank you for sharing. God bless ya, littlelight
07/22/05
Oh yes, I am the queen of "What if's" when it comes to promises and even camping. Your story reminds us the God is unchanging in his promises, he is unmoved by broken promises and he will always be the same today as he was yesterday...That I can promise!! Great job.
07/22/05
Very nice!
07/23/05
Good entry. Thinking about our promise to God sometimes helps us to keep other promises.
07/24/05
Clean this up and send it to a teen magazine.
I like the way you associate Camping Trip to keeping promises,and then acknowledging God's wonderful promises to us. It takes creativity and imagination. It applies to young people and to us adults as well! Simple but powerful.- Gloria