The Official Writing Challenge
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I enjoyed this poem very much. It reminds me of a children's song with an English setting that I can't at this moment bring to mind. But I like your contrasts with the expectations of an earthly king and what our heavenly king desires of us. It was beautifully done.
Very nicely done!
Nice idea for your poem. Good use of the repeating line. :)