The Official Writing Challenge
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Enjoyed the meter and rhyme scheme, just a little distracting that the first two stanzas didn't follow the pattern. You told the story well in poem form. :)
You got me hungry with this poem. I agree that the first two stanzas not following the same pattern as the rest threw me off a bit, but this was still a delightful read. I can't wait for Christmas dinner this year. Yum! :)