The Official Writing Challenge
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You've included many truths in your devotional writing. The examples were well chosen to prove your points. I'm glad you ended on a note of encouragement.
You have presented very good thoughts in this devotional. It could become even stronger if you included concrete examples. --Some "showing" along with "telling". Thanks for sharing an important message!
I like how you used songs, quotes and characters to make your point. I also agree with the others that a little more showing would be really fun. Good thoughts! Thanks for sharing.
09/22/08
So true - only God can fill the emptiness that nothing else satisfies. well done.
Very nice devotional with a strong message. Well written. :)
09/24/08
I love a strong message, and this delivers. Excellently written.
There is wisdom in your words. Well written and thought provoking. Nice job :-)
09/24/08
Very good devotional.
09/25/08
Great devotional...loved the last lines.