The Official Writing Challenge
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Judith Gayle Smith 09/11/08
What are you doing in the Intermediate Level? This is exquisitely written - detailed. Your adjectives/descriptions are breathtaking; your storyline is captivating. I must read all of your works! Thank you for such beauty...
Very engaging story! I think your descriptions are beautiful, too.
My first thought was also surprised that you were on intermediate level. This narrative is breathtaking and your writing has the feel of a novelist. I look forward to more.