The Official Writing Challenge
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07/11/05
Moving WWII account, excellent telling of God's sovereignty in a beachfront testimony.
EXCELLENT! I love it. I was right there with that soldier hearing the cries, the gunfire, feeling the pain. What a picture. Well done. I have an inkling you may have just catapulted yourself into the winners circle! I have many yet to read, but this is great.
For you to have gone through all that, God must have really wanted your intimate friendship. May you always sense His presence just when you need Him the most.
Sparrow
I am truly grateful to every American Soldier who paid the price for my freedom. Your story is powerful. If it is about you, God Bless, and thank you.
I love seeing his change from despair to concentrating on helping someone else and turning to God. Good job!
07/14/05
Touching, and very vivid and real to me. Times I've called out his name and seems like everything crazy comes to a halt. Very good writing and description.
God bless ya, littlelight
07/14/05
Phew. This is so graphic - I was there in the midst of it all - but was glad to find myself safely in the chair at the end. WELL DONE!
07/15/05
Very well told - rang true.
07/15/05
Powerful and real! Excellent writing!
I just can't imagine actually being there. What I can imagine is that one-word prayer that says everything: JESUS!
07/17/05
excellent piece. very good!
07/18/05
Congrats Sis!
07/18/05
Crista, I've already congratulated you on the message boards, but want to do so again here. Well done on your 1st place in the Level 2 awards, and 4th place in the Editor's Choice. And yes ... it's time to move up to Level 3. Love, Deb (Challenge Coordinator)
07/26/05
wow, Crista! that is an awesome story! I sooo agree with Deb that you should be moving up to advanced! like Suzanne wrote, i felt as if i were there with you and was so relieved at the end to find myself safe and secure, "protected by His shield"! God bless, keep writing, you're really creative!