The Official Writing Challenge
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07/11/05
This was simply lovely!
"Well Written!"
You have a great love for the beach. I do too. I enjoyed the imagery in this piece.
07/15/05
Very nice, peaceful and powerful. God bless, littlelight
07/15/05
Vey niecly done :)
07/15/05
This piece stirs up a longing in me for the far away beach; then I realize that I have the greatest, most beautiful resting place - God's love.
Ah, that we might relish all of life with this kind of wonder that is reminiscent of what we feel as children......
07/18/05
peaceful, powerful. great choice of words.
07/18/05
Peggy, you always know how to "WOW" me. What a creative and beautiful picture you painted. Just as beautiful as you are! Yes, God's love is like the ocean...unending and unchanging! :) Perfect!
The magnificent way you describe the breath-taking view of the beach and its comparison to God's love is perfect! It brings back memories of my precious time with my family at the beautiful Hawaiian Islands and its surrounding beaches. Ah, the beauty of God's creations are everywhere! I like the simplicity and clarity of your piece,very well-written. and gives me a sense of peace. Blessings, Gloria