The Official Writing Challenge
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08/21/08
Oh, you have used repetitive themes brilliantly here, to give musicality to your poem, to make it very memorable, and to emphasise its winning edge.
Ooooh I've known a few of those. Very well done!
08/22/08
Excellent poem, top-notch for this level (or any level).
Nice job on the topic. What a shame that youth must learn life's not a game. :)
08/26/08
I was so glad she listened to the voice of her Beloved. Good job.