The Official Writing Challenge
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A daunting reminder good job with the imagery and the message.
Very, very good. A great reminder that God is also out there calling us to do his work on the streets of our life; too frequently our focus is in the wrong direction. Great message.
Very descriptive of the pace of the streets. An interesting read.
At times the narrative style seemed very wordy and made me stumble in my reading. Also it was discouraging that Matthew was given no support by his fellow believers. If I were him I'd be feeling just a little overwhelmed! This is a very good reminder of the lost world, though.