The Official Writing Challenge
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06/13/05
Beautifully written! Your words are so honerably true. What a lovely tribute to Our Heavenly Father! "Excellent!"
06/14/05
I enjoyed your poem. Earthly fathers don't always know how to love us the way we need them to - but what a comfort that our heavenly Father does. And he will never let us down.
Thanks for posting.
Blessings, Lynda
A very touching,well-written poem-
a bittersweet memory of an imperfect earthly dad, that led the writer to focus on The One Perfect Heavenly Father. Simply captivating!
06/15/05
Very nice. Thank you for sharing.
Not only a wonderful poem, but such wisdom to go with it.
06/16/05
Beautifully written. Your words depict what God really is...our "Perfect Father".
I really enjoyed this... so sad in the beginning and the ending just made the whole thing great! You tied it all in. Wonderful job.