The Official Writing Challenge
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Whoever thinks you can't pack a lot into just a few words is absolutely wrong! And this proves it! Very well done! I could picture it all so clearly, as well as feel it. Well done!!
Such a sweet memory and a great memento to remember it by. You had me there in the car with the couple, feeling the elephant in the room of not wanting to say good-bye.

Short and bittersweet. Well done.
I have tried to tell a story in a bare minimum of words and have never been able to acheive the beauty and grace of this one.
This may be a postcard size entry, but it packs a novel-size wallop! Big time kudos!
I loved this...such a sweet memory.
Wow! This is bittersweet! What special memory here, captured between time and a hershey's kiss. Loved it-especially your title! ^_^
This is a very well done "sweet" memory!You've said it all so well in a few words.
A short glimpse into the memory of a man who has a gentle, loving heart, Well done!
This is a delightful and very 'sweet' story. It needn't be long to pack a powerful punch. I guess it's true that good things come in little packages! :)