The Official Writing Challenge
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I liked how your poem made a "cycle" of cousins repeating itself through the years--all in God's care. The repetition of Ray made for a good choice.
I'm a sucker for a good poem. I get goose bumps and warm fuzzies. Congratulations! I've got goose bumps all over and a big smile on my face. You did a great job describing legacy. Well done.