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Your descriptions bring your entry to life. I can see so well all the participants of the wedding.
05/29/08
Your writing captured the emotions of the wedding quite well. The little side stories (as to how they met, their love of animals, etc.) were fun to read.
05/30/08
I like the stream-of-consciousness approach here.

I got a little bit lost in the cast of characters, but I enjoyed the description of the wedding and reception.
This is just delightful! What a wonderful collection of word pictures to draw us along.
her freckly face shines accordingly amid a froth of startling sunlit curls.

I have to duck and sway around her grandmother’s very large purple hat – the hat of many flowers

... he had fallen from the roof and was badly winded. She had seen him fall and was first by his side – which helped him not at all by completely taking his breath away again!

The wedding, the fun of the reception all blend to make an enjoyable read. Well done Helen.