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Your descriptions bring your entry to life. I can see so well all the participants of the wedding.
05/30/08
Your writing captured the emotions of the wedding quite well. The little side stories (as to how they met, their love of animals, etc.) were fun to read.
05/30/08
I like the stream-of-consciousness approach here.

I got a little bit lost in the cast of characters, but I enjoyed the description of the wedding and reception.
This is just delightful! What a wonderful collection of word pictures to draw us along.
her freckly face shines accordingly amid a froth of startling sunlit curls.

I have to duck and sway around her grandmothers very large purple hat the hat of many flowers

... he had fallen from the roof and was badly winded. She had seen him fall and was first by his side which helped him not at all by completely taking his breath away again!

The wedding, the fun of the reception all blend to make an enjoyable read. Well done Helen.