The Official Writing Challenge
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What a great little story to use for children grieving the loss of an animal. Raw emotions here as well as spiritual truth. Excellent illustration of the value of pets - in teaching children about death, and also about God.
This is an interesting entry. I love the conversation with the angel. Especially liked your ending:)
This was a very interesting entry. I enjoyed the story that Michael told about Jebediah. A good lesson to be learned there. Thank you for sharing this story.
This is a story that children would thoroughly enjoy. Loved the voice in which it was told. The-story-within-a-story worked well here. Good perspective.
A really good story. Realistic writing. An excellent presentation of difficult truths. Great planning of plot and detail. Great job. :)