The Official Writing Challenge
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great analogy and writing style.
A wonderful analogy, and a poem rich with wonderful images. This was lovely to read.
I'm not a poetry expert, but I did enjoy this and thought that it flowed rather nicely. Thank you for sharing!
Beautiful. Great take on the topic. Thanks for the reminder of God's love for us.
I Like it. Keep on writing.
This is so beautiful. It flows perfectly, and the rhyme words are creative and descriptive. Love it that you tied it into the topic but still gave me a spiritual message to chew on. Beautiful.
This poem is exquisite, it is a beaufiful analogy of that one coming to Christ. He says In John 6:37--All that the Father gives Me will come to Me, and the one who comes to Me I will by no means cast out. You just couldn't say no, and how admirable that is, just like our Savior. I love you, Sharon