The Official Writing Challenge
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great analogy and writing style.
05/24/08
A wonderful analogy, and a poem rich with wonderful images. This was lovely to read.
I'm not a poetry expert, but I did enjoy this and thought that it flowed rather nicely. Thank you for sharing!
05/28/08
Beautiful. Great take on the topic. Thanks for the reminder of God's love for us.
I Like it. Keep on writing.
05/30/08
This is so beautiful. It flows perfectly, and the rhyme words are creative and descriptive. Love it that you tied it into the topic but still gave me a spiritual message to chew on. Beautiful.
This poem is exquisite, it is a beaufiful analogy of that one coming to Christ. He says In John 6:37--All that the Father gives Me will come to Me, and the one who comes to Me I will by no means cast out. You just couldn't say no, and how admirable that is, just like our Savior. I love you, Sharon