The Official Writing Challenge
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What a touching story. It's great that this woman helped rescue her mother-in-law from a pit of despair. I like how you tied this with the story of Ruth and Naomi. That is one of my favorite Bible stories.

This was a blessing to read. Thank you for sharing. :)
05/21/08
Sweet story. I have one small suggestion, edit out some of the non-essential words to make it less "wordy", making it a cleaner, easier flow. Nicely done however with a good point of view.