The Official Writing Challenge
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05/16/08
I like your conversational tone in this little essay.
05/16/08
A nice article with a very comfortable feel to it. I loved the humor sprinkled throughout, too.
05/19/08
What an awesome way to honor someone on their birthday. I like how you continued that timely honor by mentioning our current war heroes as well. Well written story.
Great job and congratulations on your win!
05/23/08
Congratulations, Norm - third in your level AND 34th overall. VERY impressive!
05/23/08
Congratulations on your 3rd place. I really liked this. Loved the voice, and the message. Great job with the topic.
Thanks to all for the nice comments. This article was a great present for my father in-law's birthday THIS year.