The Official Writing Challenge
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What a beautiful devotional writing with a wonderful message. How we, indeed, will thrive as a family if we remember we are God's children together.
05/09/08
An encouraging devotional, full of truth.

There are quite a few exclamation points here. They're best reserved for use in dialogue. In narrative, let your word choices convey the emotional content of what you write.

I like the combination of prose and poetry--something for everyone!
What a beautiful writing filled with so much Godly wisdom. This Family Will Thrive is a wonderful poem that we all need to heed and pay the utmost attention to what it is saying. We are all family in the Lord and we will indeed ALL THRIVE if we just heed this message. I love you, Sharon