The Official Writing Challenge
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05/03/08
Beautiful poem about the qualities of an ideal mom.
I think I know this woman :D
You have described a good mother very well and certainly gave me something to work toward. These are very timely instructions about how to raise my own child. Thank you. This poem also reminds me of a few special people in my life. They sure look beautiful on your canvas.
Lovely! I liked the flow and the imagery here. My favorite was the second verse though. Very well done! ^_^
05/08/08
Some beautiful thoughts in this piece about Mothers; however, I miss the rhythmic beat that comes with rhymed poetry - (but that's only one person's point of view or opinion)...but it IS lovely.
What a beautiful image of a Christian mother this poem portrays. One we all hope to attain to I am sure. Very well done. Love you, Sharon