The Official Writing Challenge
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I picked up on your hint, such a sad tale. Your title hints that healing took place for your MC. I appreaciate how she waited for God's time for the process. This is touching, heartwrenching and well done. Keep writing!
04/25/08
This heartbreaking, but because you focused on Aunt Timeless, it gave us hope. How I pray for children like this!
04/27/08
Good story, well written. I liked the concept of clocks, time, eternity, etc. A little word mix up in the following line - "I asked Auntie is she told Uncle..." - but you may have realized that by now. Tough topic to write on, but unfortunately, it is a reality for far too many children.