The Official Writing Challenge
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Nicely done!
You gave us His life in poetry and you did it very well. You showed us how a life is saved if we would turn to Him.
The greatest miracle did happen that first Easter morning. He made a way for us. The miracle is repeated every time someone receives Him. I wonder how many "miracles" will be celebrating Easter next year for the first time as a child of God.
What a beautiful and powerful piece of poetry! It made me cry joyful tears! "Excellent!"
Very good, a well poised poem, full of meanings.
Nicely done :)
Good example of how a poem is supposed to flow together. Beautiful job! Thank you!
I agree that this is a power piece. It brings the reader through a rollercoaster of emotions and has an excellent message. Awesome work!
Beautifully written poem. It flowed very well and was nicely paced. Great images of the most heartwrenching moments of our Lord. Thank you for sharing it.