The Official Writing Challenge
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This is such a beautiful poem. It seems a lot of thought went into the making of it or you are one great genius.
Beautiful! Powerful!
Loved the way you pulled me into your poem! Felt like I was I was part of it all. Beautiful piece of poetry!
Rhymed couplets in matched verse, I think I reviewed a similar work in last week's challenge. Thank you for allowing us to read this poem.
Very nice flow and images.
I liked your poem. It amazes me the talent you poets have. Nice job.
Powerful poem. Simple style. In its simplicity, though, evoked powerful, unforgetable images that touch the heart. Nicely done.
A poetic reminder that our Lord didn't opt out when He very well could have done it. A lesson we can all learn about wanting life to be easy. How would we grow? Excellent poetry.
Wonderfuly done. This was simple and beautiful and lovely. Thanks for sharing it.