The Official Writing Challenge
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04/17/08
Absolutely, perfectly beautiful.
04/17/08
Such a tiny, heavy weight he held...

Superb image, with its juxtaposition of seemingly opposite words.
Very well expressed. Poignant. God bless you.
04/19/08
You did a good job capturing a first time father's fears and joys. Good job. (and I'm so glad fathers are now allowed in with their wives!!)