The Official Writing Challenge
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Your last 4 paragraphs were especially well done and heart-breaking.
Wow! What a lovely story, perfect for topic, beautiful descriptions, fantastic writing! This brought tears to my eyes, something very close to my heart!
I love how this story comes full circle. Beautifully descriptive and touching piece in so many ways. Lovely.
Such a touching story, and very well written. You lured me in with your Title, then kept me interested with your exquisite way with words and emotions. I enjoyed the read and, in my humble opinion, if you raise emotion in your reader - that's the sign of a good writer. And you did just that...Kudos!
Very well written! It's message is one we all need to hear again. It reminds me of the need to touch my kids more often. Very well done!