The Official Writing Challenge
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Great title, and your main character (I can't bring myself to call him a protagonist!) has a really compelling voice. Very well done.
Great voice and storytelling - and what an excellent title. Very well done.
Very well done.
I enjoyed this story, it flowed well and it was a little different twist on the topic. Very good title as mentioned above. I was a little confused on what they were going to do with the knife, destroy the people or destroy their souls? It doesn't really matter, you made your point well in this one.
Congratulations on your 3rd place. Your writing is very good, and the story held my interest, but I was a bit confused by who was who, and exactly what was going on. It must just be me--I missed something.
Fabulous! I love stories of angels and demons, and this is a good one. You've really illustrated the POWER of prayer and the name of Jesus. Great use of the topic, too. Congratulations! Your 3rd place is well deserved. Move on up to Advanced, friend!